Sunday, 21 June 2009

Am i dreaming??(part 4)

We all clung on to each other as we screamed. But i just recongnized Spongebob was gone!!! Sadly, I knew we didnt have enough time to save her. I sighed and looked around for a way out. The book room? no. We wont be able to get out plus it has alot of paper which can catch on fire. The entrance to the coffee shop!! i grabbed dane, manny and chereos and ran to it. Suddenly the glass window broke and fell into pieces. We all screamed even harder as we finnaly got out. We all coughed and panted on the floor when suddenly we all stopped, But there was coughing behind us. There was somone behind us.....


We all gasped as we saw the person behind us."SNICKERS!!!!"We all screamed happily. Snickers told us that he was reading a book in the book room when suddenly it all turned black. We didnt know he was in the book room and we all kept saying sorry and sometimes we were so sorry we couldnt look him in the eye. We were still on the ground when all that happened. Then suddenly 3 blue fireman walk up to us. "Are you in the fire brigade?" the first one asked. "No" Manny Said. They leaned in close to us. "Are you in the D.A.P.F.S?" They all whispered to us. "D.A.P.F.S?? No, whats that??" me and Snickers said at the same time. They stood up straight and took out a teleportation device. We all gasped."Thats from G's Lab!! You Stole that from G!!!" Dane shrieked. They all had a smug on their face as they walked away. Then they stopped next to another blue penguin from the fire brigade."What are you doing?" Chereos asked carefully. They grinned and the 4th one said"Were testing out this device." We all gasped again. "G said he dosent know if it even works!" Manny screeched" The penguin your trying it on might turn into dust!". They smiled but in a weird way, then the 3rd one said" or penguins". We didnt know what they were talking about."who are you using it on?" i asked but before any of them answered i knew exactly who.They pointed the teleportation device at us."You" said the first one smiling with mischief. But before i could say anything.... we were gone.


All i could think about was if i would be alive or not. I thought if i were where would i be. I also thought about if i wasnt alive and what would happen. I knew i would turn to dust but also i wanted to find out what else. I suddenly saw black and knew i wouldnt make it.Seconds later i opened my eyes and i knew i was wrong. I made it. But what about the others? I looked around and saw Snickers,Dane and Chereos. I was happy but i thought someone was missing.Manny! I stood up and looked for Manny. I started crying as the others woke up. "Manny...." Chereos said with tears in her eyes. There was one minute of silence as we all thought about Manny. Snickers stood up and said" No more crying now" as we all wiped our tears out of our eyes. I stood up and saw that we were at the ski hill. I hated to come here but i walked closer to the side of the hill. I stood still. "wha-"Snickers started but Chereos shushed him."Parents" she said quietly and Snickers stood still as well. "Samson im sorry." "Its ok" I said still standing still. i walked back up to the sign which showed ways to go. Suddenly Snickers fell over and held onto the pole but it fell over and caused a crack in the ground. "SNICKERS!!!!!" we all screamed."ITS NOT MY FAULT!!!! IT WAS LIKE IT WAS MEANT TO FALL!" We just figured out Snickers was right. There was a metal plate at the bottom of the pole so if you touched it it would have fell. Someone is trying to get us but we didnt know who. Before any of us could speak the side of the mountain we were on broke into pieces as we fell down. We screamed as i held onto the fallen pole, Dane held onto my shoes,Snickers held onto Danes hoodie and Chereos held onto Snickers shoes. We all screamed again as i thought that i was like my Mum and Dad. Another avalanche, but this time, i was in it. I also thought about if i couldnt hold on....my friends wouldnt make it either

3 comments:

  1. hey i realy realy like the story!! its realy cool!! when am i gonna be mentioned. also i would recomend putting the parts into one whole story(after uve finished it!!)!!

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  2. its sad but in a good way! i wanna come back! I DONT WANNA DIE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! lolz

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  3. u r n amazing writer can i doe in part 5?

    ~frie67

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